


Essay Video Commentary
I will analyze your essay (up to 1,000 words) and give verbal feedback on its effectiveness—specifically focusing on how it might be received by admissions officers. I will share the commentary in a short video that (1) identifies the pro’s and con’s of your piece and (2) shares tactical advice for improving your writing and overall message. I will provide the recorded feedback within five business days of receiving your draft.
I will analyze your essay (up to 1,000 words) and give verbal feedback on its effectiveness—specifically focusing on how it might be received by admissions officers. I will share the commentary in a short video that (1) identifies the pro’s and con’s of your piece and (2) shares tactical advice for improving your writing and overall message. I will provide the recorded feedback within five business days of receiving your draft.
I will analyze your essay (up to 1,000 words) and give verbal feedback on its effectiveness—specifically focusing on how it might be received by admissions officers. I will share the commentary in a short video that (1) identifies the pro’s and con’s of your piece and (2) shares tactical advice for improving your writing and overall message. I will provide the recorded feedback within five business days of receiving your draft.